Characters

Characters

A Poem by Psychotic Lily
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Which one are you?

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I'm not the hero ready to save you
I ain't the damsel with a happy ending
Nor the villain with power and fear
I'm just the extra in the sidelines...
I'll be forgotten, and disappear.


© 2017 Psychotic Lily



Author's Note

Psychotic Lily
Not my best work, I know. I just need an outlet... everything's falling apart again.

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You definitely have something going here! I think the climactic peak of the poem really is the second last line, in the sense that I don't think the last line is needed to sum everything up, for your excerpt of the song (or script of the musical) is what's going to help readers pin the reference and meaning. I'd suggest taking out that last line, and seeing how it reads to your ear (to me it's much better, and it has a far more powerful ending without it). Well done!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Psychotic Lily

5 Months Ago

Thank you Emi. I'll take it out at once :) Thank you so much
emipoemi

5 Months Ago

With pleasure.
Good one , not best work..but a better one, dear...
I loved it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Psychotic Lily

5 Months Ago

Thank you Pri
Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

My pleasure.
I loved it actually that's how I feel right at this moment tonight thank you I like it

Posted 5 Months Ago


Psychotic Lily

5 Months Ago

Thank you Julie!
Hard to say. Could be all of them. I did like the thoughts and the question for the reader. Thank you for sharing the interesting poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


Psychotic Lily

5 Months Ago

Thank you for the praise Coyote
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

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Psychotic Lily
Psychotic Lily

Philippines



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Greetings! I am one weird girl with peculiar taste. I enjoy writing and reading especially if it involves fantasy and magic. Currently I write poetry, prose, and articles (I used to be part of the sc.. more..

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