He Frightens Me

He Frightens Me

He looks at me and asks

If I could give him a ride…

He caught me off guard

I didn’t have time to think of a reason not to..

I told him I would..

The rest of the night

I worked being afraid..

Trying to get out of it somehow

The clock was coming close to 8pm..

It was dark, no one around

My heart beating so fast…
I walk outside..

With 911 on my phone just in case..

Praying to God he doesn't touch me....

He looks at me in the car..

And says you are young..

I didn’t know what he meant..

I was just quiet..

Finally we reached the spot to drop him off

Once I drove off, I locked the doors and said

Never again….

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Whew the best line was "Never Again". So many people out there can strip the poetry out of you and away from us. I am glad you won't again.

[Cole Spire]

you are brave girl, very brave!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

be careful of that guy hun, please never again, very good poem yos

[Spoken]

scary situation giving a stranger a ride.. we all have thoughts of hitchcock when entertaining that idea. This piece was very gripping, left me reading each line wondering what's going to happen? and i have to say I'm glad nothing really did..

great write.

[C.J.]

wow scary i think this poem paints a very vivid picture of a sicopathic killer good job on the write.

[[untitled]]

Yes, creepy and dark. Gives me the chills. "And says you are young" . . .

Never again, indeed!

[Sean M. Addams]

kind of creepy piece.... nice dark tone that you weave throughout poem.... nice job on this.

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

The imagery is really good, I have to say It is a little scary! lol
None the less you did a great at keeping my attention.
I was the edge of seat for a minute! lol