Difficult To Unlove

Its almost impossible to undo feelings ..mostly because memories of past dont allow us to do so

In order to get away from you

I'm recollecting the things you did and said

which will make me hate you

   But while doing so,

   going down the memory lane,

          I'm also being remembered of the things you did and said

           which are making me fall in love with you again

Reviews

[Cid]

What th..the...the..the....beautiful piece you penned. Well, yeah, me too believe that no one can undo the feelings once the feelings go away from the heart but it's you, me n few others are who think that feelings can undo ...may be it can but we don't know how, why, where n "WHEN" ... cuz, once the feelings go washed away from the life, it's a heart that runs after the other feelings that could keep the heart as a beat of heart.
Am not sure what to say more to praise the beauty of this splendid piece..but last, i'd love to say that "Radhika's on fire!"

[Radhika]

thanks a lot cid for your thoughts on this piece!
You are true about the how,why,where and when clause! :P

[Cid]

The pleasure's always mine, pretty. Well, thanks for appreciating my thoughts. I hope, Radhika's not in a pain now and I hope, Radhika's enjoying the life with her beautiful smile and scents to make the world delight :)
So, keep keep smiling and keep writing to let the feelings of your beautiful soft warm burning heart go outside into the words of realness and let the readers go read your marvelous stuffs to make their days.

Keep penning, pretty!

[Radhika]

Yes Cid..thankyou for your endearing encouragements and i will keep penning :)

[Blood Ink Diary]

Ah, the sweet-serrated pang that oscillates in forgetting and remembering - we mortals are such a creation ! Well versed, dear Radhika. Cheers

[Radhika]

Thanks a lot!

[New Theory]

Those memories will never fade
I lost my heart in this unfair trade,
Now I lament in silence
Forced to smile infront of all
While you are gone now, I will never again be whole.

A poem for you.
Is the only gift I can give.
Since only as strangers is how we both will live.

[Radhika]

wow ! this can be a great continuation of my poem ! :P

[New Theory]

well it can be anything you want it to be, its yours after all.

[emma]

This is just pure beauty, great writing!!

[Radhika]

Thanks a lot Emma! :)

[Friya]

My best friend and I drifted apart. This poem is very well written, great job!

[Radhika]

Thankyou Friya :) And i hope u reconcile with you best friend soon

[Friya]

Thanks for the wishes :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is truly a lovely heartfelt poem .Well penned Radhika :)

[Radhika]

thankyou Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

I can relate to this a lot. Reminds me of how I felt years ago. Great job.

[Radhika]

Thank you !

[Rehan Roy]

One can part with the lover, not with his/her memories becoz the spell she/he had casted left those indelible imprints......associated with things. A wonderful write.

[Radhika]

absoultely rehan..thanks for appreciating !

[Rehan Roy]

You are welcome :)

[.Em.]

This is very nice. Simple... but the message is clear. And I can relate. This is how it is sometimes.

Thanks for posting :)

Em

[Radhika]

thankyou ..glad u liked :)

[Saddam]

I'm also being remembered of the things
you did and said
Yeah....it is very difficult to forget your love. I know it very well... You know why I write poetry because of this aching....
Very deep eyes on feelings. Love this one.

[Radhika]

thankyou...glad you liked it..but sad to know that you are suffering from this ache..
I hope you come out of it soon and make peace with your mind at heart :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend...hope so.