Difficult To Unlove

Its almost impossible to undo feelings ..mostly because memories of past dont allow us to do so

In order to get away from you

I'm recollecting the things you did and said

which will make me hate you

   But while doing so,

   going down the memory lane,

          I'm also being remembered of the things you did and said

           which are making me fall in love with you again

Reviews

[Cid]

What th..the...the..the....beautiful piece you penned. Well, yeah, me too believe that no one can undo the feelings once the feelings go away from the heart but it's you, me n few others are who think that feelings can undo ...may be it can but we don't know how, why, where n "WHEN" ... cuz, once the feelings go washed away from the life, it's a heart that runs after the other feelings that could keep the heart as a beat of heart.
Am not sure what to say more to praise the beauty of this splendid piece..but last, i'd love to say that "Radhika's on fire!"

[Radhika]

thanks a lot cid for your thoughts on this piece!
You are true about the how,why,where and when clause! :P

[Cid]

The pleasure's always mine, pretty. Well, thanks for appreciating my thoughts. I hope, Radhika's not in a pain now and I hope, Radhika's enjoying the life with her beautiful smile and scents to make the world delight :)
So, keep keep smiling and keep writing to let the feelings of your beautiful soft warm burning heart go outside into the words of realness and let the readers go read your marvelous stuffs to make their days.

Keep penning, pretty!

[Radhika]

Yes Cid..thankyou for your endearing encouragements and i will keep penning :)

[Wuji]

I know this feeling! This is beautifully personified Radhika!

[Radhika]

Thankyou !

[Linda alexander]

I'm also being remembered of the things you did and said
which are making me fall in love with you again
Great write, memories are so hard to totally erase from mind, clear narration of the situation is well done, reciprocity of hating and loving same time is vividly drew through the lines, enjoyed

[Radhika]

Thankyou very much Linda
I totally agree..good or bad..memories are hard to erase

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care