~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

A Poem by Frieda P



I want to skydive in red stilettos

take a leap off the wild side,

sip Chateau Lafite & Margaux

whilst driving 100 mph,

wind blown tresses

in a vintage Lamborghini,

cruise on the Rising Sun

in the south of France

sunbathe naked on the sands

of an Italian villa's shores,

take a cool dip in luscious 

champagne bubbles 

 at the Fontana di Trevi,

dance a sultry tango amidst 

a moonlit Brazilian jungle,

have my spirit soar

in sheer delirium

yet, 

more than anything at all ~



I want to love

 with all the fire & soul 

in my heart

© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P

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Oh I how I love these poems....I have wrote a few myself and I know how much fun they are and at the same time courageous to put them out there...which is why I don't share mine...big chicken....but not you my new friend...Love your style. This is beautiful and daring, feminine and strong. Great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia

7 Years Ago

LOL I know I was told the same but it didn't stick but you can comment all you want good or bad ...I.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

There's a difference between critiquing a poem and saying it sucks, I'll tell you that in private ha.. read more
Patricia

7 Years Ago

OK you got a deal :)



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I want to go!
Mind if I tag along?
Your poetry is superior.
Claire ¯_(ツ)_/¯

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You're always welcome Claire! Thanks so much.
This reads authentic to me.
True blue Frieda! (Or should I say red).
Go for it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

That made me smile, well....I have the shoes but am afraid of heights ha perhaps one day...thanks so.. read more
me too, who wouldn't................... You are the best, the poem flows like a breeze thru' the hair.

Posted 7 Years Ago


have my spirit soar
in sheer delirium
yet,
more than anything at all ~
I want to love
with all the fire & soul
in my heart

Every thing is in these lines..... Great achievement for me as you are my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Need I say that I want that too....love this muchly

Posted 7 Years Ago


A vintage feels surrounds he wording here, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


We could go anywhere, be anywhere and yet the heart needs to be in it...wonderful expression here Frieda, enlivening! x

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tips up ,way up high, a chill in the sky,spread your wings and glide straight down down the rock face skirting the glacial front to wing into the valley below, I hold on.

Posted 7 Years Ago


damn, you've taken me to so many wonderful places in this one, but I would recommend boots or even flat shoes if you take that sky dive, anyway land in style,,,i'm sure you will...

Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice and expressive I want to love with all the fire and soul

Posted 7 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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