the real conspiracy?

Elvis, Tupac & Di

joined hands

as they

touched-down

on the moon

 

madness rotated

some distance

beyond

 

& the media glare

from telescopic

spyware

singed a hole

in the sun’s

stellar core

 

it was distracting -

 

interrogative flashes

paparazzi surging

upon doorsteps

 

like wasps

colonising

a secluded picnic

 

much more absorbing

than those

old men in suits -

you can’t airbrush

political drivel

 

so stick fingers in ears

& gawp

 

at the shiny-shiny

 

Reviews

[Stiver]

C.,
It's been too long since I've feasted on your art. This piece is well-written, powerful, poignant. I like the style that it's written in, and your faboulas choice of words (interrogative, paparazzi).

My favorite image is:
like wasps
colonizing
a secluded picnic

a great image that you can see and feel. It stokes emotions, and creates a sense of panic.

Great Job!!!
Stiver

[zig]

two words

f****n' a

and of course big grins.

zig

[Emily B]

shiny-shiny. . .

top shelf work the way kortas would describe it, I can neither add nor detract from anything you've written.

[TL Boehm]

you can't airbrush

political drivel

this must be brand new because no one has reviewed it yet. I love the sparse lines and the stinging intensity. Well done.