sand 2

A Poem by Rana Adalwolfa Simon

Part 2 of my zen garden haiku series. This is all I have for now.

fine grained elegance

weightless fractured onyx leaves

subtle impressions

© 2015 Rana Adalwolfa Simon

Author's Note

Critique is very welcome on this one. I love good feedback on my haiku.

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~	Ahh, i think I like this one more. loved the "fine grained elegance" -- wow!!!! Posted 8 Years Ago Ahh, i think I like this one more. loved the "fine grained elegance" -- wow!!!! Rating /100

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Added on May 29, 2015
Last Updated on May 29, 2015
Tags: sand, haiku, garden, zen, Japan, rocks, clam, peaceful, meditation

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Rana Adalwolfa Simon

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Writing is both my profession and hobby. I hope to have a novel or two published before I die, hopefully far before then. I enjoy poetry and short stories, and novels are both a personal passion and s.. more..