Sorrow Creek

Sorrow Creek

A Poem by Raven Starhawk

Mock me with you painted lips

Crimson diamonds slither between pearls

Why do you watch me dance?

While the children of the living dead march

And Mother's Day is a massacre

You may find me down by Sorrow Creek

© 2012 Raven Starhawk

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The ending, "You may find me down by sorror creek" that is a wonderful ending to a terrific write.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Emotions and pain drips from this poem. Thought provoking too!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Very good description of sorrow.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wow, loved this. Such a short poem yet it is very powerful. "While the children of the living dead march" favorite line of the poem. Nice job.

Posted 6 Years Ago

oh wow...this poem took me into another world, one filled with painful memories and images. your emotions were penned perfectly.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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5 Reviews
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Added on July 1, 2012
Last Updated on July 11, 2012
Tags: pain, depression, misery, porm, life, death, mental illness, hate, bullied, stalked, trolled, chaos, angst, dark, abstract, other

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