Poem of the Clouds

States of mind like carousel 
Are going round and round
I want to scream out loud
And do those things that aren't allowed 
My head being lost in all the clouds
And words being lost in all the vows 
Since I was born I follow wonders
Dancing with wolves 
In rain and thunders
A wild force in tune with Universe
So hot like Sun my fire burns

Reviews

[Kent Smotherman]

Great opening two lines! Lovely expressions and word choices. I really enjoyed this piece very much. Excellent write.

[Royal Phoenix]

thank you!!!!

[Eloha]

The rhyming is pretty sweet, I mean especially if you are going for a spoken word effect, which to me you seem to be heading for...?