N.E.V.E.R. A.G.A.I.N.

Of love's betrayal...

Neither I nor any living man
 Calls back his words or deeds done,
Ever heard of one persuading Mother Nature
 To alter his race,face or stature?
Venom can never be synonymous with sweet,
 Just as trust is asphyxiated by the rot of deceit.
Ever seen a device viable against the truth
 Confined behind that smiling tooth?
Redemption's hand has been deprived of grace
 'cause towards repentance yours is a snail's pace.
Apocryphal demeanour shelled your lies in a case,
Guile inlaid,I wish I had Rontgen rays in my eyes' place,
Akin to death's shroud was your 'loving' embrace,
I, induced by your words so vain?
Never Again!
           Sinde            

 

Author's Note

The message is clear...I hope.

Reviews

[Brook]

You used GREAT word choice throughout this. I was in awe of it, I really was. I hope you keep writing like this, because while you rhymed you also had so much meaning packed into your words. The way they worked together to paint the picture you wanted to express was inspiring. Great job, it really was, keep on going!

95/100.

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this is filled with emotion and played out with refreshing use of language..all to the beat of solid meter..deep.

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This is amazing, I enjoyed the powerful message, Awesome job!

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

DICTION! you have the words! acronym poems are very restricting, you havta have the words to express yourself...and that you've done very well..VERY well...talent is an understatement!some amazing lines here -
"Venom can never be synonymous with sweet,
Just as trust is asphyxiated by the rot of deceit."
ill end up copy-pasting the whole poem!keep at it bro,youre veeery good!!

[M.Babu]

Very clear. I just love your diction man, it's so powerful and sublime. Your words are as well measured as always and delivered sharply to maximise the effect. Great write, a magnificent read bro. Keep on writing!

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Love it!