BILLETd'AMOUR

 

I am just counting my hours

My horse is galloping in joy

This sunny morning brings your freshness

And its warm feels me your spray.

 

Whenever I see your innocent image

Whenever I woke up in midnight hours

Whenever your memory frenzied me

With my blood I wrote Billet d’Amour.

 

All my enraged, all my regale

Which turmoil in my deep heart

Every clasp with pillow in peevish

Your looming image which I feel

My rage with you when you hurt

And my love which I has realize.

Reviews

[anne]

Every clasp with pillow in peevish
Your looming image which I feel...beauty..:))

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Wonderful write Saddam... it does shake you...i liked the way you added this image and made it a kind of story... good one

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[Ruth]

You have a quality of aching within your writing, potently rendered hon xo

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[Michael G. Smith]

The fragmented English makes it more unique.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend....

[stars are far]

that was very heartfelt and you poured loads of emotions in this writing.
well done my friend

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear...

[Ana B.]

I have to say that you've come to grow a great deal, and i am very glad i could witness the process, an outstanding write :)

[Saddam]

Wow!!! thank you dear for this love.

[Ashadan]

I enjoy reading this. Thanks for sharing your creative work .

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[nazia]

My horse is galloping in joy....
loved that expression of yours. You always write so beautifully that it makes the reader fall in love with your work. Great job Saddam :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear, Always pleasure to hear you.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome poem Saddam... really enjoyed in my new friend! Good work!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much...

[Jeyanthi]

I like this poem very much, its metaphors too. :)

(It could be more nice if use I instead of me in the fourth line too, coz you used I throughout the poem, "In its warm i feel your spray.")

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear. I will make it soon.