You Are The One

Reviews

[The dark story]

Saying "elegant" wouldnt do justice for this splendid writing. I was stuck to it till the very end..the very first line captivated me and smile came after reading the rest.

"My heart beats and it music
Cant live without one another"

"My core and your beat
My step and your feet"

I really liked the above lines. For me, it flows like a mellifluous music warming the heart.
It is a very beautiful romantic piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Glad you like it.

[The dark story]

You are most welcome. It's a pleasure to read your work.

[Saddam]

Thanks dear.

[costa siwale]

this is a fantastic poem Saddam. well done

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend. Appreciate your words.

[Daydreamer]

The craftsmanship of this poem is truly spectacular. An inspirational read indeed. To Love!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear...

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful and romantic.



lovely thank you for sharing.


thank you for stopping by my
page and take your time coming
back I am resting my hand and may
take a break from online for a while
if you don't see me you know why
I've been so overwhelmed with so much
at home just going to have me time and
relax.

God bless. Benita

[Lyndy]

Nice and beautifully written! Well done. :)

[sonnie ibadah]

i love the nice romantic flow of this. it's everybody's dream to find someone who is certain about what they feel for you and beyond any doubt, they are willing and ready to fight for you. simple words but you have expressed this with pure honest and love. thanx for sharing!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Wow,
spoken from the heart to a special someone
and did it get any results?
I muse over it in my mind and ask that question.
Love the human touch of the handwriting--like a delivered note
to that special person.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful romantic poem..........
very well written!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Afraa]

I am a sucker for creative poems such as this one. Such a mesmerizing piece and almost ethereal. Thank you for creating such a masterpiece. I enjoyed reading every word.

[Zahra]

A lovely, romantic piece. Well penned...