Little ray of sunshine

It does what it says on the tin

Eyes wide open still away

Full of thoughts it cannot take

Take the blade and finish it

A needle through a hole that doesn't fit

Scarred and torn bad memory

Lock it up breed insanity

Turn to the ledge from which you fall

This one last step will end it all

Go to drugs the great escape

All laid bare naked like rape

Run from you forever more

Keep on falling never hit the floor

The darkest days are in the past

Wounds become scars cut to last

Darkest memories eclipse the sun

Stare down the barrel of a loaded gun

Are you ready to take the last breath

Into the light and embrace death

Reviews

[nothing grinner]

Brilliant man, its a grate read. only thing and the irony in me saying this cause i hate it when people nit pick, is the punctuation. i think this is awsome, but if u punctuated it, then this would be the s**t, i only say this cause other people pull u down for it, trust me i now, pluss it hellps the reader no ware to sto start rest etc.

but apart from that, im really impressed! the imagery u conger up really brings this to life and made me wont to read it a gen, the way i read it it flowed beautifully but do punctuate,lol

i wone pick particular sentinces that i like in this but, its all f*****g good.
"The darkest days are in the past,
Wounds become scars cut to last,
Darkest memories eclipse the sun,
Stare down the barrel of a loaded gun"

love it man.