Unfinished poems

1. The pain inside

is slowly killing me

i cant keep doing this

i want to give up

 

2. The rain is falling down

on my bloody arm

im sick and tired

im alone and in pain

 

3. He doesnt love me like he said

I knew it from the start

i guess thats the hardest part

im sorry im not what you thought

Im sorry im not "perfect"

im sorry i wont let you use me

but im not sorry i let you go

 

4. Im sorry i cant be stronger

ive been strong enough to long

im good at hiding what i feel

im good at holding back the tears

its time for me to say goodbye, for this is my final song

 

5. Dont say goodbye, i know you dont mean it

dont say "i love you", i now you dont feel it

dont say forever, no one stays that long

 

6. My heart aches

my body shakes

im about to let go

im falling,falling,falling

a burst of light

a hand grabs me tight

it tells me that

its here to help

my blood runs cold

as it lifts me

im hurt

they could see

 

7. I will never

be enough

I try

to act tough

 

8. Reasons to stay (wrote (wrote this 4/3/12)

My hearts been stretched and torn

My trust has been broken and worn

My secrets ive hidden away

My God, to whom i pray

 

My wings have not yet grown

My kingdoms been overthrown

My knight in shining armor

My midevil farmer (idk T_T)

 

My pen is not out of ink

My brain continues to think

Author's Note

like the title says, theyre just unfinished poems that i never really useshow people...... enjoy? or not i dont care..... most of them are crap anyway haha.... (i wrote them a few months ago)

Reviews

[Simmirose]

WOW! agree with Tomislav it would be awesome if you connected them into a bigger poem... so good sam and also agree with this thing that Tom said "And if someone tells you you're "not enough" for him than that person is not worth of your time." TOTALLY AGREE excuse my language but screw that person you to good for them anyway you are amazing the way you are. I wuffles you sam p.s. im sorry if ioffended anyone with my opinion &/or language

[Angelic Surrender]

Same here o_o Wow. These are good.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

They're awesome. I think that you could connect some of them into a larger poem, they'd perfectly fit.
And I believe when we feel like giving up that it's actually the time of our need for other people. Friends, family,.....beloved ones! XD They can help us back on our feet.
I also believe that everyone is perfect for someone. Perfection is a relative thing, so you can be perfect for someone even if you don't agree on every little thing.
As far as hiding what you feel goes, that's good sometimes, but eventually we all start feeling like we can't do it any longer...we get that desire for opening up...so it's best to carefully choose who you're opening up to, and you'll be amazed if you make the right choice.
And there will always be a hand or two to pick you up when you're falling, even if you don't recognize it at first.
And if someone tells you you're "not enough" for him, than that person is not worth of your time.
Anyways, a lot of deep thoughts are in these poems, and that's awesome.
:)