I just have to say

I just have to say

A Poem by SimplyDisastrous
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I never knew people could be so cruel.

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I’ve been hurt a few times in my life. 
Haven’t we all?
But I just have to say…
To the girl who once was like a mother to me,
Believed in me,
Trusted me,
Loved me,
You are a cold hearted b***h.
Why did you leave me?
To rot in slow agony out in the open?
Oh, that’s right. It was because I was immature, was it?
That’s what you told me.  F**k that s**t. 
I’m more mature than you’ll ever be. 
I hope you get exactly what you deserve. 

To the guy I met in hopes of gaining new friends,
The guy who once treasured me,
Adored me,
Praised me,
You are a f*****g fat-a*s.
What did you diss me because you ran out of Twinkies?
Ha. No, then again, it was probably because a certain part of
Your lower body was too small. 
No kidding. You were so fat, that I’m pretty sure you were…
Let’s say , smaller elsewhere. 
To my step-brother,
You poor, insubordinate fool, 
How could you?
Do you think its funny to mess with little girls?
Do you enjoy touching girls far from your age?
It isn’t funny, nor enjoyable. 
How did your sisters cousin feel, when you
Were touching her?
She ran off and told. 
You were just lucky she didn’t tell the right person. 
Just f*****g lucky. 
Oh, let me guess, 
You’re girlfriend refused to have sex with you,
So you settled for little kids? 
Listen, I don’t know what you do in your spare time but
All I know is
You are a f*****g coward
An a*****e and all that good stuff. 
You’ll get what you deserve one day. 

To my best friend who took something dear from me,
Something so valuable, So precious to me, 
Why did you do it? I know, I know, you didn’t intend to. 
But would it have killed you to notify me about the situation?
It was fucked up what you did.
You and I both know it. 
To this day I still can’t get over it. I lay in bed, 
crying some nights.
It’s your fault. 
It’s been awhile since it happened but I still can’t stop thinking
about it. 
Thanks a bunch. I owe you nothing.
I feel empty nowadays. 
I can’t sleep. 
I hardly feel like eating.
I hope you’re happy. 
If you’re reading this,
Then good for you.
I wanted to call you a b***h and throw a fit but
You’re like a sister to me.
Even though you broke my heart,
I still can’t stop talking to you, 
Even though you f*****g screwed my hopes up, 
Crushed my soul. 
I hope you got what you wanted.







© 2010 SimplyDisastrous


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Awe this poem was sad and I think it is very powerful. I liked the ending. The first two were just angry and the last was still angry, but you still had love for your best friend which is a good thing. I liked this poem. It is going into my favorites. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Pure, raw fury, heartbreak and sadness. Friends, even your best, can always surprise you and stab you in the back, whether you expect it or not..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe this poem was sad and I think it is very powerful. I liked the ending. The first two were just angry and the last was still angry, but you still had love for your best friend which is a good thing. I liked this poem. It is going into my favorites. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello Kristen,

Just wanted to tell you. Very well done. An interesting write that was a good read. Course, being the not so right person I am, I felt the urge to come over and say well done.

Always,

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Part of a collection I will always hold close to my heart. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it but i kinda don't get some parts... So was the best friend a rapist or something to little girls.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a powerful write..
i can really feel the anger in this..
good work..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this. Alot actually. (: It's getting added to the favorites.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. You've been hurt a lot, and your anger fuels this whole poem. It's incredibly powerful. No corrections. Beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The conflict in this poem is powerful and impressive. I like to see the evil side to people in conflicts but I don't like it over the top. This was not over the top so it is ticked off my negative list. There is no such poem on my negative list so no one needs to worry really. Why did I even bother saying it. I love that line "Crushed my soul" it makes the enemt feel so responsible for there actions towards you. This poem is brings regret and guilt upon the enemy.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I had to wipe away the tears when reading this. To know that things like this happen. It's sick, sad, and just wrong. But you wrote this very well I think. Your words are very strong. You did a very nice job. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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SimplyDisastrous

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Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..

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