You

You

A Poem by SeaBreezes

You learn me to cry
You learn me to walk
You learn me to smile
You learn me to talk

You learn me to hold on
You learn me to be strong
You learn me something everyday 
You learn me to find my own way 

© 2013 SeaBreezes



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i love how is very simple . and very powerfull its just like shining from the sun. thank you for giving litlle hope

Posted 4 Years Ago


I like it!!!! dawwwwww I think the ending could be stronger, but other than that I think it's very sentimental.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love it, the use of the word 'learn' used out of context, a child in its journey of learning everything anew. The word use throws you to begin with, I took it as defining the word itself. Very cleverly thought out. Keep writing,

Posted 4 Years Ago


A sweet short poem about appreciation. I like it a lot x

Posted 4 Years Ago


doesn't make any sense hun should be u taught me for every line but great effort. and i like the last line quite allot (You learn me something everyday
You learn me to find my own way)

Posted 4 Years Ago



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