Stargazing

Stargazing

A Poem by Blue

Stargazing

 

 

I am in love with your eyes

Those lovely pair of blue flames

That burn brighter than the fires in the skies

At the sight of my face.

 

I am in love with your dimpled cheeks

Like two moons over the curve of your perfect lips

How timid, how tender, how tame

Beneath my curious fingertips.

 

I am so in love with your voice,

Your pale skin, your wild hair
That the massive midnight glories of the canvas above

Proved to be lesser wonders than the parts of my Love.


© 2015 Blue



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That the massive midnight glories of the canvas above
Proved to be lesser wonders than the parts of my Love.

Now here is a love poem. Great work, Blue.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I see you fastened you seat belt, this is good as always girl

Posted 2 Years Ago


This truly shows your passion and admiration for this person that you describe very well!
Nice flow and structure, too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


the parts themselves might not stand out....but put them together and there is definitely much to love.

this has me in goosebumps...if only to be loved this way.

Posted 2 Years Ago


awwwwwww! so beautiful ... love your closing lines ... well said ... we are blessed to experience that beautiful real to the bone love once if lucky .. and sometimes it comes around again .. love your poem .. its a bright spot in a darkening world :)
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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