Hum and Be in

Hum and Be in

A Poem by Sethnicity
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"I'm so tired of the burnt up planet and its lack of luster!", says my son as we cross the Earth's surface now scorched. I say, "I'm sorry Son but keep moving, I did not Birth you in vain."

"

And Yes, I am Tired,
I'm spent!,

writing socially conscience wit for 15 years
I've been asking Why the F*****g Sheep

will Live and Lie for radioactive Die


I see nothing great in the Powers That Be
Even my Colored Brethren can't cure the virus
Woe is me

for passing on the burdens to my future seed
But today am I ready to Bleed.


Are we ready to change no matter the cost?
I think on that Vote we've Lost,
Lost our Focus, Lost Our Souls, Lost the Will
to fight or,

to give or,

to hold back

anything for our kids

Too

Hum and Be in


Father and Mother And Holy Son makes Trinity
but here on this Earth there is no Euphony
It's so beautiful how we travel through this galaxy
Yet insist

We persist to Catastrophe
The next time you are Pissed or, Confused or, Drunk or, Abused
Just look beyond this Earth and enjoy the view
Every light in the sky is a life form All its own
if we Hum the Ohm while Alone

the Vibe-Ration will lead Us home.


I feel bliss when the Breeze and Ocean cover me

even though
I'm stuck on this Rock scared to Just

Hum and Be in


So when I'm tired soles worn and weary
please Just let me

Hum an Be In


A forgotten song sung in Piece
One I verse to calm the Beast
when all the Battles have been lost
When all this money has lost its cost
As the Caps melt into Waves
and Life Giving Sun beams death rays
Sing a Song in Peace and let us

Hum an Be Raised  


© 2012 Sethnicity


Author's Note

Sethnicity
Just an observation.. for the Future:
just a Human Bein' Raised.

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This is a wonderful poem .. This has s much impact just reading I can imagine it would bring the house down were it spoken ... Hum and Be In..
So simple it sounds.. wonderful piece. It takes me on a journey through life.
I really like the sound of Just Hum and Be In.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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amazing write man good stuff

Posted 12 Years Ago


Easily the best poem I've read on this site. I dig the agony that is watching the sheep be ignorant on the one hand and then enjoying life and beauty on the other. Which to focus on? Sometimes I wonder that myself.

Also what's strong about this poem is that speaker acknowledges the world is fucked up but finds the one thing he can find peace, strength and comfort in - self. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How do we change, for the better, as humans? Collectively? Individually? Generationally? Maybe all of them, simultaneously, and in progression. Wonderful piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

REAL!!!! ~nuff said~
that was a great read and I appreciate this for that....
**tips my lyrical wand to you**

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many people have indeed lost their will/power/vision! This world could be so much more and what do we do with it, we have become sheeple, not the people! xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoy the smart and intuitive way you broke down the word human and captured what the essence of this physical life craves..."to be in" I can relate to looking apart as if I know more because I am not following the crowd; but even them I am part of this human race; craving community as well as perserving my individuality...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very nice poem! So well written and deep. Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the message you present here! This is both sharply observant and loftily lovely in its own respect. I adore the lines, "Every light in the sky is a life form all it's own. If we hum and ohm while alone... the vibe-ration will lead us home." What a beautiful thought. This is universally impeccable writing, Seth. Love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

impeccable writing from the center of the humanE being which still harbors not just sight but vision~pure energy

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful poem .. This has s much impact just reading I can imagine it would bring the house down were it spoken ... Hum and Be In..
So simple it sounds.. wonderful piece. It takes me on a journey through life.
I really like the sound of Just Hum and Be In.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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