The Page

The Page

A Poem by Shasha

Lets tear off the page,
The scribbled one,
Covered with the colours,
Which we painted together.

Lets tear off the page, 
The one with the memories,
The one with the love,
The one with our drawings.

Lets tear off the page,
Which carried our words,
Because it's old now,
We got a new one to start.

© 2017 Shasha



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Shasha
Hey! thank you very much for reading, please let me know how's it!

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Great logic in the below words.
"Lets tear off the page,
Which carried our words,
Because it's old now,
We got a new one to start."
Hard to forget things. But we must and begin again. Thank you Shasha for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


Shasha

8 Months Ago

So true, but we must and begin again.
Thank you!
:D
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome Shasha.
Great job! By the way, it's not necessary to put commas at the end of each line. Just put them where they're required. Beside that, this is awesome:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shasha

1 Year Ago

Oh, all right!
Thank you very much Ethan for your kind review!
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Gee
Yep, plenty more pebbles on the old beach of love. As one door closes..
Nice Shasha

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shasha

1 Year Ago

Yes, thank you Gee, glad that you liked it!!!
One day, one emotion, one life stanza at at time ... strong and poignant write - well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shasha

1 Year Ago

Oh, thank you very much!!! You made my day!!!
Tear my off a piece of the emotions used to write this splendidly profound inspiration... Nicely penned...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shasha

1 Year Ago

Oh, thank you very much Silente, I am glad to listen this from you!!! Thank you!!!
Silente

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome, Shasha...
Out with the old. She's gone.
In with the new. Blond one.
Require big fridge magnet now.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shasha

1 Year Ago

Ha! A big one! But that's not my experience, I stay away from it! It is one of my friends. Thank you.. read more
Yaasss...tear off the page...of memories...and hang it on the fridge until the new is done. This was imaginative and compact, both hard to do but you did.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shasha

1 Year Ago

Yeh! Thank you very, very much, I am pleased that you liked it! You are amazing!
It's kinda sad... maybe u can add something about saving the torn pages??

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shasha

1 Year Ago

Thank you, but maybe you are right, I can think of a better one, thank you for your suggestion!
AwesomeSiya

1 Year Ago

Happy to help!!
Shasha

1 Year Ago

Well,
:-)

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Added on June 27, 2017
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