Freedom

Freedom

A Poem by TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror





Show me Something I've never seen
Take me where I've never been
To Lose these chains and fly
Leave these walls and kiss the sky 
Through great remorse be brand new
Which is a dream and which is true 
Now, my future is so violently torn 
From the life that I was born 
Am i a creature to be free 
Or trapped at birth by Destiny 
Conditioning leads me to the latter 
But Without freedom ..... Nothing else matters







© 2017 TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror



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Author's Note

TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
I wrote this in one of my worst moments. This is written on the wall of a prison cell. My dwelling for the first 14 days of my second trip to prison. I had Freedom for 93 days. I will carry this little poem with me always it is a part of me. If your still reading thank you and God Bless

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You are tough and full of hope... do you mind telling me what took you to prison?

Posted 1 Month Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

1 Month Ago

Aloa Taiwo, what took me to prison literally speaking the police. The crimes that I committed to go .. read more
This poem is so incredibly powerful. It hardly matters what position you're in, this one hits you like a brick in the face. Everybody feels like they are trapped at some point in their life. Be you in prison, a hospital, or simply at home living the life you planned out for yourself, there are certain rules in this world that keep us all tied back. You captured this idea wonderfully.

Posted 6 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

6 Months Ago

That is very insightful. There are a million ways to be a prisoner of your own device. I had no pe.. read more
This is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. May God always bless you with freedom :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


The authors note lends a new perspective to the poem. Good poem.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Thank you for participating in my contest.
Simple yet elegant write.
Your Author's note helped me to get into deep of this piece.
Enjoy the freedom.
keep writing

Posted 9 Months Ago


And oh how the poet grows. Minor hiccups but otherwise really good. It's relatable and well executed and It flows well. Your growing into your own skin.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love this poem! I can relate to this so much!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Change, when life is brand new. Freedom a great experience. Experience freedom and we will never be lost again

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on October 15, 2016
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TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror

PHOENIX, AZ



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