Peacefully Chaotic

Haiku string for contest

Our Blue Lagoon Waits

Paitently Reflecting Stars

We Dance on it's Shore

 

It Knows we will Come

To Swim Within It's Waters

We Can not Resist

 

Tranquility Calls

As Gentle Waves Rise and Fall

And Cradle Our Feet

 

Laughing we Dive in

And Shatter the calm ripples

Creating Chaos

 

Our Giggles Echo

We intertwine together

And Slowly we rock

 

Passion takes over

Our Blue Lagoon's Cool Waters

Heat With Our Movements

 

Sated we relax

And Holding Hands as We Float

Surrender to peace

 

This is our Lagoon

It Knows Just What we will Need

No Matter Our Mood

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jess Jules]

This is really good. Speaking for the masses of people like myself who cannot execute one perfect haiku for you to create such a beautiful string is amazing. I love how it has the classic nature components of the haiku. This also has this romantic intimacy I also love.

[L.G. Knight]

Thank you, I really appreciate your view on it.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning Haiku-String-Along-3 contest!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Haiku-String-Along-#3 Contest!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very nice Haiku String. Thanks for entering my contest.