I adore you, always...

Today

you smelled salty sweet

enough to bring me to my knees

it divinely reminded me of

the weekend we spent

at the beach

this weekend past.

 

Today

you tasted salty dear

whispering quietly in my ear

sweet nothings

yet delighted I was

to feel you near and

taste your touch.

 

Today

I heard your salty swarm

beneath my loving arms

I felt you bend to my will

delighted in the thrill

of our coming together as One

you make me feel

Zen complete.

 

Today

you made me feel salty warm

so fine

completely, wholely Sublime

as You to me

became

One again

its never the same

it's never the same, my love without you.

 

I adore you, always...

 

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

OH how beautiful, being in love like this is the best feeling in the world, "Zen complete" pretty much says it all and your use of salty senses is just gorgeous. I wish everyone could feel this intensity that is overwhelming *sigh* such bliss...such togetherness...such magical power in these words.
Loved it xxx

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I like it, evoked lovely images in my mind.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

OMG, you touched a very deep poin in me right now , I adore that writing, its so romantic and deep, thats the kind of potery unlimited I am looking for ... beautiful Yossi

[The Analog Kid]

Nice use of "salty." Very cool statement of your love by using the senses!

[Wicahpi]

Scents have the power to drive
one wild. The salty air of a beach
would be divine, I think.
Roar! haha Nice write!

[Antonio Valentino]

Sid, this was really beatiful (and hot too!). Great job with this piece, I loved it.

Antonio

[Ladysue]

I adore this piece. You have described beautifully this romantic feeling. This is what we all would love to have. A great piece of writing...

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Description and story was sweet and kind. When we allow someone into our life. Need and want them. Can rebirth a dead spirit. Love and emotion in your words.
Coyote

[poetic soul]

uhh!!! very innocent yet so passionate!! loved it!! completely!!

:) love,
Krishna

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and oh full of love,
Amazing beuatiful write you have penned!