Loneliness

Being Alone
Is Very Difficult
It Can Make Anybody
Feel He Is Nothing
He Has No One
Who Can Listen To Him
With Whom He Can Talk
Who Can Care For Him
Loneliness Also Can Make
Person Mentally Disturb
Loneliness Also Made
Some Peoples Wild Monsters
But Being With Dishonest
And Feelingless Peoples
Is Worse Than Being Alone

Reviews

[olla]

whew.. it took me awhile to find one I could read..

it is a terrible thing to be with someone and still be lonely..

[Sikandar Khan]

i am happy that you got your cup of tea...

[olla]

it was a language problem.. I am mono literate.. but i am glad I was able to find that you are not.. it was well worth the effort.. thank you..

[Sikandar Khan]

welcome dear

[BlackPrince]

You are absolutely right about the sadness of loneliness. You imply here that we all need people in our lives to feel loved and needed. Yet you balance it by truthfully pointing out that though we need others in our lives to combat loneliness, we also must be aware that
'Some people are wild monsters.
And being with dishonest
and feeling-less people
is worse than being alone'.

It's true, we must be positive ourselves and surround ourselves with positive people. It's no good being friends with a thousand demons when you can have only one angel as true friend.

WELL DONE

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Your Bundle Of Sweet Words.........

[TPK Stories]

Amen. I'd much rather be lonely than be with dishonest, heartless people. Excellent poem.

[Sikandar Khan]

Yeah Your Are Right And Thanks For Appreciation Mam....

[Priyanshi]

Loneliness is much better than being with dishonest and heartless people..... they curbs one....
The exactly true feeling you wrote which is a somewhere relatable friend:))
And sorry for late review SK....
was busy these days ...so didn't open the read request folder

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Your Late review...Hehehehe

[DIVYA]

I totally agree with you. So well said!

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Appreciation......

[JDAwesomeness]

This is amazing! Once again it feels like you are writing about my life! You are amazing at relating to everyone!

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Again For Appreciating My Work...

[barleygirl]

Your statement is true & easy to relate to! I like your straightforward style, explaining how it feels in everyday terms, & then ending this with a slightly different observation which is even more true. There are many ways that being alone can be enjoyable . . . many furry & feathered friends out there . . . better than putting up with a hurtful friend! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Sikandar Khan]

Yeah Thanks For Appreciating My Work And Style
Moreover Your Review Is Also Exciting One!

[User]

“Being With Dishonest
And Feelingless Peoples
Is Worse Than Being Alone”
Loneliness is a b***h. This line is grand! Thanks for sharing my friend

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Appreciation Mam........

[Fanicia E.]

Amen! to the last three lines. I feel like everyone wants to fit in or be understood, but sometimes people forget that it's not worth losing your identity. "Loneliness" is a perfect reminder not to sacrifice oneself for fleeting friendships. Great job :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Appreciation....

[Fanicia E.]

You're very welcome

[HeyJadeXO]

I always struggle with the introvert and extrovert within myself and this really captures that back and forth feeling.Awesome job

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Appreciation Mam........