Silence... If only for a little while.

This is for Narla. I love you.

Things you would have never noticed before, come alive when you're alone.

They speak in this unfamiliar tone.

Tattered and torn to the bone.

They whisper, shout, bellow, they hiss.

But you can never tell them apart, they sound the same.

Outside its louder, more distinct.

You feel at home.

This unfamiliar voice sounds better, it speaks pronouncing every letter.

But still, it remains distant, like miles or years away on a boat... and forever afloat.

Things you'd of never noticed before, come alive when you're alone.

When you are alone you accept them; the tones of an Indian Tribe, the roaring of a lion in its pride.

You embrace them.

 The rustling of a tree, the humming of a bee.

Reviews

[AndyJCash]

I write this really late, because I wanted to reply before I forgot so sorry if it's lacking a bit!
I enjoyed it, I thought it was clever and enticed the senses. However, I'm torn on the last stanza. At the moment, it represents simplicity which is what you want, for the sounds of the world are simple yet we take them for granted. At the same time though, I felt it didn't conclude or bring everything together. So I am torn on the ending.
It was a good poem though regardless of my ramblings. Good stuff :)

[Dove]

This is great! I think this is really clever and i really do "feel' this poem. You did a really good job on this

[Jaco (Jaik Miller)]

I love this! Lol i've been listening to Dr. Dre allday soi couldnt help but speak it rythmically in my head

[leinahtan]

Marvelous, i should get a tutorial from youuuu. I admire the Simplicity and Straightforwardness of your poems, yet this is an artful literature. :D smooth, beautiful feelings it harmonizes to the reader.