Daily Senryu #1 - Pressure

Daily Senryu #1 - Pressure

A Poem by SilverInk

I can't stand pressure
Why put it on me, not you?
It weighs far too much.

© 2017 SilverInk



Author's Note

SilverInk
Could you give me some tips about expressing thoughts through haiku?

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I love this,
very well said in a few short words.
awesome

Posted 5 Months Ago


i love this..i love how you accent the pressure with the crossed out lines .. i believe this is a senryu however ..haiku are about nature ... senryu about people and usually with a lesson or irony or human foible in closing ... something like that .. if you google them you will get a better idea ... i think you did a great job .. makes me smile and cheer "Yeah" put it on you for a change ..love it!
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


SilverInk

6 Months Ago

Thanks, and I'll make sure to label this as a senryu.
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

best check it out first...make sure i have it right ...can't tell you how many times i have done jus.. read more

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Added on November 24, 2017
Last Updated on December 9, 2017

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SilverInk

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