Much More

In two weeks, I can

give you a guarantee

of two tulips because

for your heart…

Mine is too true

Love!

But three tulips would mean much

more.

And that is what

you are…

Much more

Reviews

[JayceeC]

Beautifully romantic..I love the use of tulips. People don't pay much attention to the meaning of flowers these days. But for years what flower you sent was as important as the arrangement itself. Sorry years as a florist made it impossible not to comment..lol :-/

[sinNsincerity]

I love flowers now. I never understood why my grandmother did when I was a child, but once she past away, I brought a lot of he plants to my house and started a garden, so that I would always have a piece of her.

[JayceeC]

I've kept a lot of my mom's and planted her roses in my yard too. Its a great remembrance

[B]

I love iit
Worth much more

Yet maybe the tulips is all she would ever want

Simply
True

[sinNsincerity]

Heh, the tulips are a metaphor representing my love and I say three would be much more because enough is never enough...
=D

[Melinda McQueen]

Tulips and love..... ahh the sweetness.
Nice write.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Melinda!

[erinwrites]

I liked this comparison of tulips and love. Both very beautiful, well done!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Erin!

[Sindu]

I read it atleast six times before I got here because it ended and I wanted it a bit more. I cannot say it's just sweet cos it's that and everything else.. hmm guess that's what love is. I am still learning and searching.

Tulips and love... smile smile :)

[sinNsincerity]

Sorry I couldn't give you more with this one Sindu =D

[Sindu]

=) less is more and that speaks a lot here

[dan]

Such a rich expression of hope in such a manner draped in sincerity. This piece rings a loud bell announcing the fact that hope does indeed spring eternal, reaching for the results desired, living in search of the rich bounty of love so joyfully spelled out. Very nice write! take care...dan

[sinNsincerity]

Hope, faith, and love is very much so eternal to me and I respect them to the fullest. I am very sincere in everything do, say, and think, but there isn't always going to be perfection. That's where the Sin in my pen name plays a part. Progress, revision, and repetition is key to my life...
Thank you so much for reading Dan and I love what you thought about this piece!

[Ankita]

That is what this writing is :)

Much More :)

[sinNsincerity]

Or at least it should be...=D

[Ankita]

Be sure..it is :)

[Rana]

Oh so very sweet and lovely! When you can make words transform melt blur into some vivid emotion, you can be sure you're great at what you do. Loved this so much!

[sinNsincerity]

You are something. Thank you Rana!

[Pratik Mishra]

I enjoyed the line - And that is what you are much more very much! Good poem!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you enjoyed it Sir!
Thank you.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Simple, short but beautiful in his simplicity. A proof that a good poem doesn't have to be long. Very well done. :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

Thank so much Rudi. I highly appreciate it!

[nazia]

Absolutely adorable. the way you compared the love and lovers to tulips is beautiful. You are thinking out of the box.. way to go David :)

[sinNsincerity]

Enough is never enough is the way I see it.
Thank you Nazia. =D