Theatrical Scene ~ Infinity

Future, present, and past…

The days will everlast.

Relapse?

More like a nightcap

Mr. bottle caps

Number 7, Jack.

The confines of my mind...

More like outside the lines,

More like undefined,

More like it’s…,

I’m fine.

Welcome to my high!

Love blows me away

I’m afraid

Please say it’s okay…

Does she still love me?

Can she still find me?

My chest is glowing!

I’m holding,

A snowing for she.

Come melt me!

Reviews

[Nadia B.]

Your third stanza is a masterpiece to read! This poem is golden, it has the melancholy feel, satirical flair, the sad yet hopeful, a passionate end and circular read that ties in with your concept of infinity. I could read this over and over again, the word selection and sentence structure is eloquent and well decided upon. You have a masterful talent. Please never stop writing, and thank you for sharing such artistic beauty!

[sinNsincerity]

That means the world to me and I'm left speechless...
Thank you Nadia!

[annalysiar]

This one is another of my favorites that you did. Short, sad and sweet. It leaves that hanging hope along with a lost helpneses

[jeannemarie coulter]

if the jack doesn't do it the fine companion will...i liked this one as it drew thoughts out to a conclusion that worked...

[sinNsincerity]

Jack's my best friend haha
Thank so much for spending the time to read this!

[alf]

Hi Sin. Once again you have transported me into your world!!!! Beautiful . . . you have a way of bring your words alive and I love your work!!! alf

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!

[fattycbreezy52]

this appeared to me quite psyhological like some stream of consciousness technique.
This is wonderful.I love when a poet/author gives a vision of his own feelings,moods and emotions.I have never written much for myself.So i have an extraordinary desire to know this *sighs*

[sinNsincerity]

You can write what and how ever you feel. I don't believe writing should have limits. I just believe that it's all about how much I'm willing to expose myself lol
Thank you so much for your insight, I really do appreciate it and I always love to hear what people are thinking.

[Devious13]

well if this were fairytale then it would not be more picture perfect , you delivered it nicely and the meaning was intense all the pieces , I myself am a hopeless romantic but have given up on love and think that its not in the cards for me as you see , but this is very romantical ! that's a fav word of mine

[sinNsincerity]

I'm a writer...of course I believe in happy endings lol
But I have also given upon love, well not really, I would rather say I just hold less expectations towards it now, but the love I hold and can give...I have learned no one can take that from me.
You owe it to yourself to be happy and you must hold onto anything left that does.

[HappyFeeler]

It was clean, crisp and lovely. Way more said in fewer words. Great.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so and reading!

[Elisa]

I can definitely hear the desperation in the speaker's voice, as he tries to drown his sorrow while figuring out exactly what's going on in his lover's mind. Great poem.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Elisa, I really appreciate that.

[JayceeC]

High on love and life is not a bad way to be unless it is manic in it's extremes. Loved this except the "for she"can't get past the grammatical error. Overall ) iked this write and style.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jan.

[Ana B.]

Oh wow, i must admit it is my loss into delaying reading this one. I loved the inner flow of thoughts, rushing with a speed...then slowing down...
The line : ''The confines of my mind...'' is my favorite, since it has so many ramifications and so many ways to continue it.
You painted a very beautiful and romantic picture. The closure is truly brilliant. A remarkable write dear author!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ana. You are totally right. You can continue it in so may ways from that line.
I was actually going to end at, "The confines of my mind," but I also wanted to travel within it a tad bit...