Forget My Face

Forget My Face

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Please,

just let me be.

Can't you see?

See that I'm not cut out for this anymore...

I take, and take , and take your love.

And then I leave…

Please,

just let me be.

Can't you see?

The trust in my heart isn't

as I used to train it to be.

The billow of moans and pillows has vanished

and its lust has now become an old widow.

It's fucked up it’s like that,

and I know that you like that.

But after all I have endure,

I have become stoical.

Please,

I beg of thee.

Just let me be.

Can't you see?

But I see how easily

it was for you to

call me a dick,

scratch my face,

bite to break skin.

It thrashes me up inside,

and I would bleed for you

if it could take the pain away.

But it won't.

And that's hidden in plain view,

so let's tear this apart

before we kill each other.


© 2017 sinNsincerity



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ohhh the violence of obsessing ... far too real ..and the ignorance of continuing to allow the "coming back" .. love the honesty of this one ..and from the perspective of the selfish one ..far to often we hear the whines of the "victim" ... the use of the word "kill" in closing is very harsh and has a shocking effect on me ..only because it happens in reality .. not too long ago in Sioux Falls SD a woman murdered her lover because she wanted to leave...cut her up in pieces and distributed her throughout the cities dumpsters .. she had no previous record ..whew ... powerful poetry says i!
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Obsession is my comfort zone, Kill me, not yet?
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

yes..not yet indeed :-



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I'm enjoying this dark write about what we call "love". Love can be so euphoric, but you captured the chaos love can enrapture. Beautiful write, deeply felt.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

That's my Gospel. EvEn the the chaos can be euphoric for those like me who...
the dark side of love,the part we learn the hard way

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

After awhile it comes easily. hehe Tough love is the best. Stay blessed Ron.
This is dark. I love it. Love your style

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

I love you for loving it Dee.
Damn... a dark, emotional and powerful poem Sincerity!
All those repetitions in the poem made it more engaging, and added more flavour to it!
Well done, keep it up :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Thank you Mr. Writer, i do enjoy hearing that you were pleased with it.

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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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"It was about that time I realized that searching was my symbol, the emblem of those who go out at night with nothing in mind, the motives of destroyer of compasses." Hopscotch -Julio Cortazar .. more..

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