Quadruplicity and the Cardinal

My sacred heart,

My blessed soul,

My darken mind.

Although raised from the sand,

I'm made from the light.

But rather than flying towards the sun,

I fell onto the dark side of the moon.

What a plight...

"Sin" is in SiNcerity

like the sins passed onto me.

i believe in three,

but I'm combined

by the 6 and the 9.

That could be unity

or a blackened hole.

Temporal or Eternal.

To let you know who i really am

You would have to look up

Psalm 23.

And once you do,

You'll know that it is i

who finds comfort in thee;

even if you are my enemy.

FOREVER.

Author's Note

I've revealed too much...

Reviews

[ManasaC]

It is really beautiful especially
"My sacred heart,
My blessed soul,
My darken mind"
and I really loved these two lines too
"But rather than flying towards the sun,
I fell onto the dark side of the moon."
But would you please mind explaining
"i believe three,
but I'm combined
by the 6 and the 9."
Everything i was able to understand except the above.
This is really nice.
Good Day!!!

[Carol Cashes]

"You'll know that it is i
who finds comfort in thee;
even if you are my enemy."

Best lines and relevant to me, personally. While I struggle to "love" my enemy, my indifference is just as damaging without staining my soul...

[Ana B.]

As ever, my mind is nodding in agreement with your breathtaking words. Brilliant and self-aware. Love it, love it, love it :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm running free-yeah! hahaha
Thank you Ana, I always look forward to hearing from you with the reason being that you aren't so shabby yourself with the way you use words as well.

[Ana B.]

haha, thanks :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Such beautiful poem with a verse. I truly respect in what you believe in.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[sinNsincerity]

Aye thank you, I believe in SEGA.

[Jes' Pi]

"Although raised from the sand,
I'm made from the light."
Very nice.

[BBP]

Like the sins passed in to me.......... Rad line. I can relate to that for sure, pretty much the whole damn thing is relate-able. Like the flow and the words.

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you, I'm stoked that you thought so and that you were able to relate. That makes it all worth it.

[wordman]

sounds like a soul session

[sinNsincerity]

Soul dimensions...?

[ROXANE DORSEY]

very very nice poem thanks for sharing your talent.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Roxane, I'm glad that you'd enjoyed it.