First Love

Could it be for a life-time

Or could it be just for now

There are so many things that I wanna say

But I just can't figure out 'how'

 

And the ever continuous time

It sways with it's own beat

But how'd I know that it's the time

For you to really see

 

What lies behind my eyes

Can you see me through?

And I...just can't wait

To tell you 'I love you too'

 

So the roads help us keep in touch

They cross over and over again

I can feel you though you're nowhere in sight

Has it all just began?

 

And I can't control myself

I'm swinging and singing to you

And I don't care a bit of what others think

I wanna know that I matter to you

 

And it lies behind my eyes

I wish you could see it through

But I guess it all will have to wait

Till I say that I love you

 

And I'll keep it all hidden

Till I feel that it's the right time

And I'll wait for that day

When I'll be yours

And you'll be mine...

Author's Note

Wow!! Another romantic piece!! Hehehe.... XD
I was just listening to 'Somebody's Me' by Enrique Iglesias. Maybe that's where I got the idea to write somthing about love. His was sad love but mine is happy love...umm...puppy love...
Argh! I dunno...it's love....
Hehehehe....ENJOY!!!
*gets up and looks in the mirror to make sure if I'm still 'me' *

Reviews

[Dani California]

This is lovely Siya...
I'm so sorry it took me so long
to get here...

You are getting better
and better! Not that
you needed any improvement...
:)

Your flow and rhyme are
awesome...

and yes, you are getting
to be quite the romance
writer... sup w/that? lol

Again, awesome work my friend!

[Lady Lazarus.]

Could it be for a life-time
Or could it be just for now
There are so many things that I wanna say
But I just can't figure out 'how'


sums up love sublimely.
you're the best poet i've ever read the work of on here.
ambsolutelly incredible work.

[Emily Elizabeth]

Very very sweet, as usual. A lovely, stunning piece, as usual. You write way beyond your years, my dear! Thanks for sharing!

[Partha]

ah! how sweet! simple approach, simple words, simple rhyme, simple flow, simply cute and charming! A very good poem.

[Mercury Mirrors]

Lol this reminds me of me & max =/ I told him I love him but we both go our seperate ways...meb one day when the time's right, huh? I like this. It's simple, & the beat is right on & the rhyme scheme makes sense. its ubercute thanks for posting it ^^.