Can't help myself

Can't help myself

A Poem by Dreamer

 

 

I shouldn't feel this way,

not after the way you hurt me and tore me in two....

but I can't help myself..,

in loving you <3

 


© 2013 Dreamer



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Reminds me of Sharon back from 3rd grade. I never did find out who she was, not really. And although she was mean and cruel to me, she always held my hand while she did it, and that meant more to me than anything else in the world at the time.

So sorry you were hurt. The problem with 'opening up' is it lowers the normal defenses we have, and leaves our heart 'open' to injury. We TRUST others, and when that trust is betrayed is when it can hurt the most.

Hang in there, Dreamer ... :)
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Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thanks so much for your comments, they mean a lot.
I'm hanging in there the best I can...
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dw817

4 Years Ago

Oof. You hit the "read more" error in Writer's Cafe. It's always a good idea to re-load the page and.. read more
Dreamer

3 Years Ago

oops I seen that...thanks for the suggestion.



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Wo sad, with tears in my eyes I read this, but beautiful!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

thank you very much (:
Great write, nice rhyme and rhythm, short, touching and true.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

thank you very much (:
that was very nice and creative great job :P

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

I appreciate it, Ryan (:
David Burke

3 Years Ago

you're welcome lol you earned it
Dreamer

3 Years Ago

:D...................
Love take us to good and bad places. Can't forget the people we had loved even after they have broken our heart. A sad and powerful about the subject of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

you're welcome! thank you very much for your review!
'I don't know how to appreciate that
Coz, i'm just speechless and out of words
You've a burning and intriguing talent
Which is very very rarely heard..'

Damn good poem..honoured reading it..thanks for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! I appreciate you reading it!!
This was awesome hit home for me a bit..very similar to how im feeling right now :-( anyway greay write

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, Koty!
It's a sucky feeling, isn't it?
The best of luck!
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koty bell

3 Years Ago

Thx just broke up 3 or 4 days ago so wounds r still fresh..yes very sucky..thx no prob write was awe.. read more
Since you have written this...let me remind of a few songs which you might like to hear if you haven't heard already..."Make you feel my love" by Bob Dylan, "Still loving you" by Scorpions...you'll connect well with these...


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thank you very much, I will check into them
i know whoooo! you cant help the way you feel about others

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

uh..no, pretty sure im not confused!
Quiet Child

3 Years Ago

hmm...........
Dreamer

3 Years Ago

hmmm?
.......
we are sometimes undone by the amalgamated emotions ! good write

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thank you very much!
sure...even angels can't help while we are in love...I can tell B-)
its simple but amazing

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thank you very much Glitch!

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Dreamer

Jackson, OH



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My name is Katie, I'm a senior in high school who loves reading, writing & photography. My dream college is University of Cincinnati... I've wanted to go there since I was 8. I love playing soccer an.. more..

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