Beyond the sky

It’s us is hateful

Is them who are grateful

It’s us who don’t care

Is them who don’t mind

 

We think of ourselves

We don’t think theirs something

Better than us

 

We believe but we don’t think

We have so many powers we could use

But we don’t try because we don’t know

 

We could be some thing better

But we don’t try

We don’t know this

But there is something beyond the sky.

 

Beyond the sky we should look

Beyond the sky is the truth

Where are the bodies of the past?

Think about it and you’ll know

There is something beyond the sky

 

Some of us know but some of don’t

Some don’t want to admit it but they do know

 

Beyond the sky there is a better us

 

 

 some secrets we keep

some secrets are kept from us

 

 

Reviews

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This is beautiful! Very honest- and true words you speak here!

[Marie Harrison]

I like this write! Fabulous job. Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Many true statements in this poem. People are blind to other people problems and pain.
"We have so many powers we could use
But we don’t try because we don’t know"
I believe many kind people would help their brother and sister in this world if they knew. I like the feel and the emotion of this poem. A lot of questions are create from your outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Goodbye]

Other than the errors the other mentioned, this is really a cool write! It has a quality to it that with a little work could be a song, too. Very creative!

[sarah]

wow this is stunning something about the wording was really great!

[Cassiopia Summers]

There are some small errors, like spelling errors, and missing words, but all in all it's a great write. (:

[Linear]

Some small errors in this, missed words and some spelling errors, but that aside this is a thought provoking write, with some lines being particulary rememerable, thank you