Lost in a dream ~ Senryu trio

Inconspicuous ~

the mist in your mystery,

billows over me.

Supernatural ~

our dreams collide at midnight,

can you feel it too?

Unexpectedly ~

your face rises like the sun:

can we shine as one?

Author's Note

A bit of an experiment, trying a single word for the first line of a trio of senryus.

Image = Reminds me of childhood, by Graham Gercken

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

So beautiful the softness and tenderness of comparison between nature and natural beauty within loves eyes- oh what a delight to be seen like that through someone’s eyes- mystical and make believe brought out into reality, I love the words🌹

[Kelly Scheppers]

...beautiful image, and your experiment of using a single word as the first line, is fascinating! It makes your presentation pop from the screen.

[Ardra]

very nicely done :)
senryus and then trio of it... like 3 scoops of your fav. icecreams...

Mist in Mystery... :)) like that line a lot.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Glad you enjoyed it:) Now I need a new project ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful journey in your words. You led the reader to the hopeful ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks John.....this was a harder one to write, because I had to plan a bit. I'm used to just let my words "gush".....glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you are welcome.

[Einstein Noodle]

good title sir! love senryu that set me own heart to yearning a dream ;) i especially like the contrast of inconspicuous and billows in the first one ... the surprise of love that occurs like that is pretty cool!
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks for the review, E! I think I live in a dream world, mostly.....did I tell you that I want to do dream analysis? lol.....pipe dream # 67.....the surprise of love.......now that is another title....:)

[Einstein Noodle]

no...i did not know of your desire .. i love dreaming ... even the uncomfortable ones ... i think that there is definite meaning s in them that are generally similar tho the shape of the dream may change ... i have looked up the analysis of them on line but have not found a serious treatment of them yet ... good luck with that .. i would love to know when you graduate ;)