You

Until you

I was lost

Until you

I was nothing

Until you

I forgot how to love

Until you

I was lost in the dark, nothing made sence

After you

I was found

After you

I was something

After you

Love was all i could do

After you

I found the light

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[.]

repetition adds to the impact being made......uplifting..

[xx_strawberry_xx]

I like the repetition in this poem because it actually works well.
I think when you typed "sence" you meant "sense'' though

Great Job~ :)

[Light]

finding that "you;" that other half that completes you! lovely concept. nice, simple write. i like!

-light-

[Erin_is_peace]

Aww Tay I really like this poem. It's a different side of you that not many people get to see. Who is this about?

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. In so few words you told a beautiful story of love and emotion. Love is the hardest and best days of life. Rarely do we do it right the first time. I like the total poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ricky]

I like this poem it flows really well =]

[Zachary_James]

Great job

[sweetylee1994]

it was beautiful. Flowing with grace. ^_^ I liked it.

[J. C. Koch]

I like the repetition and the hope.

[Kristen]

I love the rhythm and flow of this poem. Very short but very powerful as well, good job!