We'll Meet Again

And maybe in some other life, we'll cross paths again

It has now started to feel like years
Since you left us and went away
To drift away in your happy lands
Wish you could just stay
And maybe we could talk more
And cherish every moment
But now that you've left
Every second is a torment
Your giggles were the best
And could bring a smile
But at last that disease took it away
And you lasted only for a while
Maybe i wouldn't have taken you for granted
And spent a little time with you
But somehow you left me alone
And made me feel so blue
There isn't much that can be done now
And I can only feel this lingering pain
But I won't say a good bye though
So, until we meet again :)

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[Zoe Taschereau]

Very touching. Keep it up! The last phrase hit me hard !

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you very much :)

[Najam Us Saher]

But I won't say goodbye until we meet again. I love this line. Beautifully written. I loved the entire poem.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much 😍❤️

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome and remember if it is meant to be it will find a way. ☺

[Sonakshi Arora]

I'll always remember that ❤️

[Surya]

Hope so,..
And that's a beautiful feeling you created...I enjoyed it..:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Superbly written and bit of emotions in it, title and poem both are really well..
Wonderful poem.
Liked it from the top to
the bottom

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :)