Why?

Just a scribble..

Why is it so?..
A Depressed heart weighs more than a smile on a pretty face,
There is no destination for flowing tears from a bleeding heart,
No cavalry to win over own emotions,

 Haha! Oh dear, for every being here, no peace and no ease..

What a creation it is....

Author's Note

Scribbled lines may be or may not be worthy at all..

Reviews

[Rebecca Garber]

I do not believe that this is a non worthy piece at all. You know that this is actually a really perfect piece. It is the thoughts of the heart coming out and actually saying what it wants. It shows the your heart just does not beat it can be torn and ripped and hurt, yet no one really knows why. The line there is no destination for flowing tears from a bleeding heart. That really hit home to me, but it is right where is all of these things going to take us. Why do they happen. I don't think anyone will ever be able to answer that.

[Surya]

Haha, may be...and thanks to you for your kind visit nd warm words...Keep visiting...:)

[Stacy Purvis]

The depth of emotion colliding with regret and the never truly answered, "why?"
I love it.

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit and your view...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and true words.
"A Depressed heart weighs more than a smile on a pretty face, "
The above line is true my friend. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John for your kind visit and words..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Surya.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I never thought of the weight of a broken heart or a smile. The messes we get ourselves into is amazing.

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visits and sharing your view here...:)

[Asmae]

what a creation it is....

[Surya]

Haha, I donno..

[writ rajat]

Very nice ,
think twice ,
Eat rice ,
Eat dal,
Be happy there is no heart in emotion so don't live in emotion ty

[Surya]

Yeah, I will try....Thank you for your words...:)

[writ rajat]

Good can we become friend

[Surya]

We are already..

[Biswajeet Samal]

nice one bro i can understand your pain but alas its all destiny thats playing foul game

[Surya]

May be, but pain rite...

[Bala Gorthi]

So beautifully penned here, Surya! For every being here, no peace , no ease. A depressed heart weighs more than a smile. There is no answer to this why, Surya.

[Surya]

Haha, may be there is, if we able to find....Thank you Bala for your visit and words, am glad...:)

[Manasa.L]

Its completely worthy. The lines are spun around our life, gives such a joy in reading. Well done.
Keep sharing your thoughts and spread smile on every faces.:)

[Surya]

Sure Manasa ji, thank you for your words...am glad that friends here like my works...:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

"No cavalry to win over own emotions"
Love this line. It tells a lot of things from heroism to unsuccessful defend for a heart that is not wanting to be broken. The why? question deserves a lot of writings than just that though. :) Maybe I am just use to writers who put up a lot of image and emotion to the usual questions of why? All in all, well done.

[Surya]

May be,....and Thank you for your kind visit and adding your views here...:)