Why?

Why?

A Poem by Surya
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Just a scribble..

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Why is it so?..
A Depressed heart weighs more than a smile on a pretty face,
There is no destination for flowing tears from a bleeding heart,
No cavalry to win over own emotions,

 Haha! Oh dear, for every being here, no peace and no ease..

What a creation it is....

© 2017 Surya


Author's Note

Surya
Scribbled lines may be or may not be worthy at all..

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A very true write indeed! Highlights the facts of life! Great. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sonakshi...:)
Sonakshi Arora

7 Years Ago

My pleasure!
Very good start surya
A Depressed heart weighs more than a smile on a pretty face,
Loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you Farhan for your kind visit and words....:)
Keep that pen and notepad handy. Words come floating through the mind all hours of the day. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Yeah..:)....thank you for your visit..
"A Depressed heart weighs more than a smile on a pretty face,"

I think it's because it's human nature to take for granted what we have and grieve over what we don't.
A deep scribble, well penned 👍

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Yeah, it's human nature.....
Thank you for your words here..:)
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome! It was a pleasure 😊
The flow was good then suddenly reading Haha disturbs the smooth flow I felt....Apart from this it was really good. I liked the line a depressed heart weighs more than a smile on a pretty face.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

I guess so, no editing done for this, and this is the one I mailed you in telugu...l'll translation... read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Oh...okay...you're welcome.

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Added on March 14, 2017
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Hyderabad, India



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