Am Blind...

Am Blind...

A Poem by Surya
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Blessed am..

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Fed up in these colors,
They change everyday
behaving base of a day and
Breaking the wall other day...

Better am blind, so
I couldn't see them
even if they break...
How kind am to forgive them.

Evil behind the smile
To change person and kill everyday
Better am blind
I couldn't see them...

Better am blind I speak with heart
and I have no brain that scams a bag
Blessed am blind, I have no eyes
To see these superficial selfish creatures...

Graceful am to lose my vision which
gifted to create a world of my own colors..
Gifted am, these colors of mine
have no knife but a smile to cheer...

Blessed am, Am blind having no eyes
Proud am, I have a heart....

© 2017 Surya



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There are always some good things despite the struggle. Being blind also has some positive gains out from it. You did say it well in this poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Capolavoro...:)
I LOVE this! Totally relate. Please review my writings, I am new and have never really done poetry but would love your honest opinion. Xoxo.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind visit and words...Yeah sure I will pass my opinion soon...whenever am free.... read more
Wow! It's so true. An optimistic poem as you even took out something positive in being blind. Truly, this was genius. A good job indeed!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Aww!..Thank you so much Sofia..:)
Sofia

5 Months Ago

Pleasure is all mine :)
"Evil behind the smile to change person and kill everyday better am blindI couldn't see them..."
Awesome lines i mentioned above..very good job

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you Farhan...:)
but it gets harder and harder not to see the reality
that is upon us

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Yeah it is upto us...Thank you wordman...:)
That's a really unique concept, and it's really appealing. I really really liked this one. It feels so true and like straight from the heart kind of thing, and I guess that's makes it special. This poem deserves a lot of attention, cuz its amazing! I think this one is your best piece, in my opinion. Keep it up!!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Anjali...:)
Anjali

5 Months Ago

You are welcome!
yes perhaps going through life wielding a blind eye to the negative might be the best thing...what we don't see or acknowledge might not hurt us...i miss my youth when i was naive...i plunged forward without a care.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Sometimes it's better to flow....Thank you J.
Amazing job surya ji as mr. Writer said...Heart touching ....Keep writing surya ji

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thanks a ton Pragya...:)
pragya gaur

5 Months Ago

My pleasure surya ji
Very true! The ones who have a clean, nice heart, technically have treasure basically...
Amazing job Surya, keep it up!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you Shaan..:) and yeah they have treasures...:)
Well done, friend...Wonderfully written.
Lucky are those who're blessed with a heart.
Thanks for sharing such beautiful poem.


Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

They are lucky....
Thank you Priyanshi...:)
Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

My pleasure.

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