Khoobsurat Jhunki..

I don't know whether it's romantic or funny.

Hhot bade hai tumhari jaha hasi  

Saari pyaar chamkaayi dike mujhe 

Patli kamar tan tanake kyu jaate ho 

Dil mera milka ki tarha kyu bagaate ho 

Jhunki chaand ki pehne ho 

Raat chuti hi na kabi aankhon me meri 

Itni kubsurat aankee tumhaari  

Lage hume ki papoota rahe hi na 

Aur humari aina kabi‎ 

Bandh hue hi na 

Kya kahu teri ye khoobsurati dil pe 

Lafz bi kahe ki hume zubaan na nikle 

Pesh karne mein....

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

Oh hooo... Gone so romantic... In this way u gonna achieve the tag of "Romantic poem writer"... Sweet and lovely write

[pragya gaur]

Great write loved it...sorry for being late

[Bala Gorthi]

This sounded beautiful though I didn't get certain words well. It tells about the charms beauty can cast upon one..
Nice craft..

[Priyanshi]

According to me, this is funny..lines are really good.
Great write.

[Zoya]

Lol. Funny...but overall, a short sweet read.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

haha..this is nice.
papoota ka meaning kya hai?

[Surya]

Papoota--eye lids
Thanku so much darling...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahah..okay..
pleasure.

[Sandipta$]

Nice... But hhot kya he???? Sayad bahat. Dike nehi dikhe....papoota?????

[Surya]

hhott---lips...I cant spell it correct...
Papoota--eye lids
Thank you Sandipta...:)

[Abraham George]

i am not good in Hindi . sorry to say that.

[Surya]

No problem...:)

[Mr.Writer]

I think it's a bit of both :)
I really enjoyed reading this as it had emotions and humor to engage the readers!
Well done, keep it up Surya!

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you Shaan...:)