kabi...

kabi...

A Poem by Surya
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Thank you all..

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Yaadash bi aisi cheez hai, jaan le leti hai
jaan bi kamaal hai bina teri yaad ki reh nahi sakti hai

Pyaar kabi ek tarfa nahi hota yuhi kabi
meri dadkano me aur teri yaaadon me

rehto ho mujhse dhoor kabi
bichadte ho meri yaadon me kabi

ye gunga ki awaaz bana kabi
abi ye mareez ki dard-e-dadkan me
pyaar bi hua kabi

© 2017 Surya



Author's Note

Surya
This day completes a year of my writing life...
I wanna cherish this day by sharing a poem with you,
Thank you all for your support and your wishes.

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Some story like me so read it with great interest and like always I loved it

Posted 2 Months Ago


Good to see your writing after a long time. As always, this is very heart touching. Liked the honest words.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Surya

3 Months Ago

Thanks a lot...:)
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
Wow.... Beautiful! Loved reading it.... Keep writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Surya

3 Months Ago

Sure, Thank you...:)
Anjali

3 Months Ago

you are very welcome!
Congrats surya . . . . u really made your own place here . your poems are really lovable , full of emotions, fellings and that too with notable rhymings . . . keep entertaining us with your talent and at the same time keep supporting me also as you always do. . . . by the way, i will also complete my 1 yr in januray 2k18. . . though i am not a full time writer but whatever praise or appreciation i got for my stories, you have always played a great role in motivating me with your inspirational reviews. . really i got some gems on this site and you are one of them . . . thanx again

Posted 3 Months Ago


Surya

3 Months Ago

Sure and thank you...:)
ek saal complete...waah ji...
is poem ki har line kitni achi hai....wow.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Surya

3 Months Ago

Thanks a lot dear...:)
Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

my pleasure.

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Surya
Surya

Hyderabad, India



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