Stallion of the Dark

Stallion of the Dark

A Poem by SyberRose
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INSPIRED BY BEN HOWARDS VIDEO...OATS IN THE WATER

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I feel haunting whispers waft across my skin,

as tumultuous tides swallow the memory of you_

and lavender shadows creep along the sands;

but the ebb and flow of the ebony ocean

torture with sighs of yesterday,

as the wind rides the stallion of the dark

beneath a black lingerie sky_

and the salty musk in the luster of once was

lingers as the night speaks within the

bittersweet language of love_

And the twilight dissolves within a fiendish sea

consumed with the interpretation of rapture.

 

©SyberRose


© 2013 SyberRose



Author's Note

SyberRose
Thank you for reading...Inspired by this amazing song.

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a beautiful write of love,the song is great as well

Posted 2 Years Ago


SyberRose

2 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to read today...appreciate it...Rose
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you are welcome rose
It is a cool song Rose but your poem is a tour de force!
Such eloquence in this tale of bittersweet longing and of love that dissolved like foamed surf and was all washed up but so very impetuous while it 'lived'.
This is mesmerising. I keep wanting to go back and read again - bravo my dear friend.
x


Posted 2 Years Ago


SyberRose

2 Years Ago

This was a challenge in Poet Freak Anthony...I love that song...so glad you liked it...thanks for po.. read more
Your poem matches the song so well, blending the harmony and words of from your piece, melting within each other. Much Enjoyed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

I love that song...i have it on my mp3 player...glad you enjoyed this piece Soma:)
"beneath a black lingerie sky_
and the salty musk in the luster of once was"

There is a wonderfully sensual feel to these two lines. Musk and lingerie...yes....perfect. Overwhelmingly emotional and certainly bittersweet. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi and so nice to hear from you ...hope the new year is going good for you...Rose:)
Lydia

3 Years Ago

Thanks Rose....may the new year be good to you!
Hey dear, I absolutely love this, I enjoyed reading totally. Good day and I have sent a big huugggg.....

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Cassie...and have a wonderful new year dear...HUGSS
This is wonderfully beautiful and dark... I loved this piece. Superb as always, Rose.

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Travis...glad you enjoyed and thanks for peeking in...Rose:)
words describe the video perfectly, awesome and dark..just the way i like to read poetry..

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear...i love that video and the song...Rose...hugss
My sweet friend, this is stunning and feels of desperation to me. I found it hard to breathe as I read this wonderful poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Thank you Jack...glad you liked this piece...and so nice hearing from you today....Rose:)
It's od delicate and touching, I loved it and enjoyed very much reading it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Haim and so nice to hear from you...glad you enjoyed this piece....Rose:)
What can I say Rose except romance will always be alive with you around.

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Thank you Dale...yes I think you are right haa...:)

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Tags: dark, romance, shadows, ocean

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SyberRose
SyberRose

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Welcome to my profile: I was born in England, and raised in the U.S and now living in Virginia. I write mostly of romance and nature....I prefer not to send read requests so if you wish just read at y.. more..

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