All Hope Is Now Truly Gone In Vain

Why are we seeding evil ?
Blasphemy, profanity, vanity
Where is your sanity ?
Scorn with a thorn
Murderers and haters
Put our mind in the incinerator
All hope is gone

Never to cope with what is left
One day of bully
Is enough to send your dead body
With pieces in the trolley
Killing with rage
Like a beast inside a cage
Fangs and claws
Ripping your flesh and jaws
All hope is now gone

Justice is under a piece of paper
Without knowing who are the creepers
Living the life of solitude
Kicking the daylight of your right attitude
Bad deeds comes without a shame
Covering yourself with blame
All hope is now truly gone

Look beyond the mirror
See the ashes flowing down the river
Your body is filled with someone else's blood
But still your thirst
Always make you the first
To steal away for your precious lust

Mind Yourself!!!
If you truly care
Pick your words wisely
Or things will get dicey
Glory is on the top
So pick yourself with ethics
Or get killed by the lunatics
If you care about yourself
Truly don't let it go or else
"ALL HOPE IS NOW TRULY GONE IN VAIN"

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work, wonderful message, I too feel what your saying.
I write things of similar feeling as well,thanks for sharing, b-blessed.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Mr James. Thank you for your review. And thanks to Dale also.

[wordman]

it seems you have wrote about our societies and our morals of the times great write
160 million Christians in the world and we are losing a battle because they wont stand up

[Terrence Chang]

Yes but it is not just the Christian but all the people who give humans a bad marks.

[wordman]

yes,of course

[Matching Socks]

Incredibly powerful delivery!
this could be one of those slam poetry things.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Ana for your wonderful review. I am happy you liked it.

[Confuser]

This is a fantastic poem. I love it and every word - Wow. What a great message - the rhyming is amazing and something we can all relate to! Truth and honesty, fairness, kindness, empathy; forget the vanity. You are so right. Bravo, Love it. Thank you so much. My favorite!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you very much Confuser. I am glad you liked it very much and have a great new year

[Confuser]

Chang, loved it. It is a great poem. Thank you. Prayers to you and your family for a prosperous and Happy New Year!

[Terrence Chang]

Same to you Dale have a great day.

[Confuser]

I'm in SC, USA. It was warm here almost 70 degrees/now tonight in the teens. Very cold. School delayed for an hour. Crazy mad weather.

[Terrence Chang]

Haha. And on the other side of the continent it is always hot as hell no matter what season it is.

[Confuser]

Yes, but can breath in all those wonderful spices. HA! Hate the summer here; humidity is horrid. Wish I was rich, and could say "we summer in the Bahamas." Hehehe.....Bye

[Confuser]

Wow, I loved this all over again; you can get scary; it's good! T. Chang, the righteous fellow, don't bother him ever! HA!

[Confuser]

All this technology Chang, my son just brought his earphones attached to controller/xbox playing music. I had no idea he could do that. I'm certain you did; Great music too, will not tell me the name; I suspect I know why. I'll be back; he has a sleepover! Got to help. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you for such a hilarious comment

[Confuser]

Oh, you guys cannot fool me; remember I have older daughters, newphews: you the new Uncle will drive your sister crazy one day. I'm not overbearing; it doesn't give confidence; a balance; we work together. He KNOW a lot more than he should. Enough said!

[Terrence Chang]

Haha I guess soo Dale

[DoormanDan]

This delivers a very powerful message, and your word use really makes it even more powerful! On a scale of 1 to 10, I give this poem a 59469375489357489359237548439057! Fantastic writing sir! :)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dan I am truly honoured

[DoormanDan]

Anytime! It's always great to read amazing writing!

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Very good piece, great job Terrence.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Mr Brian

[Deron Anthony]

I feel this is screaming cause and effect but on a moral level of good and bad. But one man's bad is another's good, semantics Etc. Do not fear the dark side because the light can blind you too and if you try you can see in the dark. Polarity, a Paradox etc. Your right if you look in the mirror and see monsters its only yourself misunderstood.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Deron. Thanks for your review. I do agree with your point as light being innocent and dark being wise. It is a great paradox to think. I believe that all these are just an entity that we chose and make our own character.

[Deron Anthony]

thanks for your poem it made me think :)

[Terrence Chang]

Your welcome

[Yash]

I like it.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Yash