Are we allowed to be jealous of Jesse? Just for this one poem?! : ) The first four stanzas are gorgeous. Not fair, considering we know that this is for Jesse. lol How do you spell "sigh"? Oh. I just did!! Your introduction into the poem with the scene of snow is perfect. It's soft, pretty, and free of knowing any rules as to where it is allowed to fall and color. The third and last line of the first stanza? lol Love the gentle sarcasm in your easy speech. A slight hip-check to anyone near ya... that was adorable and I Loved it!! In six stanzas you have managed to sum up all the reasons little girls play "house" in grade school, and have their pretend boyfriends that only last a day's time. Your fifth stanza is corny to me, but it's corny because the sincerity in it is over my head, and jealousy "a wee bit" takes on the realization that I have just now started to recognize it as so. *Big Hugzz* The last stanza.... even cornier, but I think that is why I Love You on this site, Taylor. Your way with words and that heart of yours reminds me of every single good time I had as a child in my family, and it is missed, incredibly!! I can't tell you how wonderful it is to read you and that I know where to find you when I need you. I hope that I have not upset you any. *Big Hug still going strong* lol xoxox -Your Mark
Are we allowed to be jealous of Jesse? Just for this one poem?! : ) The first four stanzas are gorgeous. Not fair, considering we know that this is for Jesse. lol How do you spell "sigh"? Oh. I just did!! Your introduction into the poem with the scene of snow is perfect. It's soft, pretty, and free of knowing any rules as to where it is allowed to fall and color. The third and last line of the first stanza? lol Love the gentle sarcasm in your easy speech. A slight hip-check to anyone near ya... that was adorable and I Loved it!! In six stanzas you have managed to sum up all the reasons little girls play "house" in grade school, and have their pretend boyfriends that only last a day's time. Your fifth stanza is corny to me, but it's corny because the sincerity in it is over my head, and jealousy "a wee bit" takes on the realization that I have just now started to recognize it as so. *Big Hugzz* The last stanza.... even cornier, but I think that is why I Love You on this site, Taylor. Your way with words and that heart of yours reminds me of every single good time I had as a child in my family, and it is missed, incredibly!! I can't tell you how wonderful it is to read you and that I know where to find you when I need you. I hope that I have not upset you any. *Big Hug still going strong* lol xoxox -Your Mark
My name is Taylor Bigelow, I am eighteen and I absolutely love my boyfriend, my cats, music, writing, and playing my trumpet.
Some of the bands I listen to are: Pierce the Veil, Sleeping with Sir.. more..