SCREAMING FOR HELP

I... Can't...

I don't... I don't know

Help

I can't...

Stop crying....

The whole

World...

Empty...

Is fighting

Help...

Against me.

Tears just run

Down my...

It burns

Face....

The hot steel...

HEEELLPP MEEE!!!!

BURNS...

I can't...

I don't know how....

To stop

IT HURTS!!!!!!

SCREAMING.

HELP ME!!!!

END MY MISERABLE
PAIN!!!!!!!

Reviews

[quarintine_deathangel]

My head hurts now.. Good write but I didn't really get what it was about, just a lot of imagery and description. If that's all you were portraying then you did an excellent job since there was no content that strayed from the imagery, very straight forward and relateable.

[CHRIS ANDES]

the mystery in here brought me a lot of questions
nice write=]

[Jacob Mann]

Interesting...

[ATG]

A very powerful piece. It really gives a great sense of someone in pain. The poem was simplistic, but very well written. Hopefully this isn't inspried by something in real life. If so, you have my sympathies.

[Gregory]

jarring. i loved it.

[Philip Smith]

Interesting. Not sure how to react to this one.

[♋ Iris ♋]

Ouch, I could feel this one. Its a good write with lots of emotion put into it with word choice that makes us, the readers, understand how you, the writer of this poem, feel. Awesome write and I can't wait to read more of what you have.

[Daenerys]

I can literally feel pain while I read this.