Criticism

the journey from criticism to ...

criticism reasoned anger

anger  ruptured into tears

emotions lashed the soul

silence prevailed far and wide

solemn, still, stormed

regret shattered the pain

a voice whispered through the winds

drastically overcoming whims

lessons were learnt

for the future to clean

the litters of past

 

 

Reviews

[Farhan Shaikh]

That was really Well written...i loved the poem specially last 3 lines
"lessons were learnt for the future to clean the litter of past" ..indeed..i loved it..keep writing..

[Tazeen Ahmed]

thank you loads Farhan!