Alternate Ending (The Fiction)

In case the .0001% chance that she comes home...I always thought she would like to beat the odds and prove everyone wrong...I still hold on to one day she will

Yes, the door is still open for you
But you have to make me believe you true
Don't walk in like you're in charge now
And no attitude to turn me foul

God knows I want you back as bad as when you left
But you need to earn my trust, prove this isn't theft
If you can't make me believe this can be like before
Then spare us the effort, of what would be in store

If you can look in the mirror and say you love me
And tears come to your eyes for the way you made me bleed
And being open and honest is your new way of life
And raising a happy family, not teetered on a knife

If for your life you will work to keep me happy
And it makes you smile, to turn me back to sappy
I deserve nothing less than you swallowing your pride
Every day for almost a year now, I've almost died

I know on my end I can stay true to all I say
But I need your constant smile and attention all day
I need something to believe in again in my heart
Please let it be you, holding on like from the start

Believe in your love for me and admit you were wrong
Fall to your knees and thank me for staying strong
If you can't work to rebuild all you lost
Then don't come back, I have paid enough cost

If you can love me as much as I love you
Then this price is not high, it's less than I'm due
You know what you're getting when you come back with adoration
Theres only the real me, I'm never an imitation

Maybe these words sound harsh but I know my worth
All I'm asking is you act like, you've had a rebirth
Prove to me as I have always done to you
Yes it's a lot of effort, but I know I'll always be true

Reviews

[mou]

when chances left a few apart and huge negative signal, but still heart wants to wait, this is called nothing but an unconditional love and you paint it at every line.
here emotions are quite strong and at the same time a beautiful poetic environment is maintained well.
your words are just heart wrenching ...
wonderful !!

[Teddybearlee]

My deepest thanks for your review mou, I know keeping the "poetic environment" is struggled in many of my writings, I tend to go off on tangents, so thank you for noticing that and mentioning it.

[mou]

yes I too feel the same problem sometime mean to maintain the poetic rhythm while writing a feelings but you do it very well and I like the other writings as well.and you are welcome friend.