My Angel

Notice the ones you don't...

She stands there

Her face red

Her cheeks puffy

Stained with tears

Those tears were of not anger

But of sadness

She was standing there

Facing the end

The edge of the tower roof

A peaceful overview 

Staring down at her buzzing town

Eyes dulled with confusion

A once beautiful face caked with darkness

Arms swinging back and forth

A nervous chill running up her spine

The voice of the Heavens blowing through her hair

The hand of the God, her God, reaching out to her

Whispering to her, It's alright now

She knows now that they could never hurt her

Her heart throbbed with anxiety

The wind whisked her off the edge

She was brought up into the clear sky

A ray of sun shining down upon her 

Her God reaching out his hand

A flutter of snow white petals circled around her

No darkness or stabbing pain surrounded her

No more cuts or bruises

No more suffering

Wings as delicate as silk

A dress that seemed to fall on her like snow

Eyes as blue as the shimmering sea

A heart that was soft as cotton

My angel,  Her pure God called to her

No more can they hurt you

She sat on the cloud, greeted by others like her

She was now finally free of her wicked curse

Reviews

[wizardlypoet8]

I have experienced the same situation, but it was much uglier. You turned something terribly dark and gruesome into something very beautiful. And I love the way you as the writer stay unattached to the girls religion in the verse
"The hand of the God, her God, reaching out to her
Whispering to her, It's alright now"
You show that it is her God, not necessarily your beliefs...
I don't know if that makes sense, but basically I love this. It was really very beautiful.
good write! C:

[TheBubbleManiac]

We all have gone through some dark times, and to know that you can get through it is the most wonderful feeling ever. I have had many friends in a much worse situation, and I just tried to turn into something more beautiful. You are also right about the God. I believe that every person has their own God and that they do not necessarily need to follow the god that everyone else around them. They can choose their own. Thank you for reading!

[ExquisiteEyes]

Beautiful picturization. I really like it.

[TheBubbleManiac]

Thank you very much! :)