Fading

My sad story

You all complain of your broken hearts
But inside I am jealous of you.
A heart needs love in order to break.
My heart has never felt love like yours
It remains empty
And is fading away.
If it disappears, so will I.
I'm holding on
With hope alone
But that won't last forever.
Please turn around and look my way,
Please don't let me fade away.

Author's Note

Sorry, I lied. I figured out how I want to end it.

Reviews

[Dreamer<3]

Um, wow. This is so amazingly awesome. I really love this, and I'm not even a poetry person.

[KAREN]

Well written and flow good and really depressing!

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

i really like this too. you're an incredible writer

[EvilAngel]

wow i've never thought of it that way.jealousy of the brokenhearted.really interesting.

[TheTattooedPoet]

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. The dance of love leave us wanting to swim in the passion and sweetness again. Even after a heart brake. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good write. It really was interesting. I have gotten my heart broken recently. I know how this feels and this kid wants to keep me around just to hurt me again. Well thanks for sharing. :)

[aj]

It interesting because it sounds like they're wishing that they have had a broken heart before. But I guess the point is in order to get a broken heart you need love, and that's all this person wants.
I like it {:

[Vanna Renee]

You should rewrite it
haha not in a bad way either!
It's really good, by rewriting it, learn to EXPAND it, spiritually and wholly.
I'm interested to read more about it!