Mirror 鏡 Haiku

Sometimes, you must be a mirror and tell it like it is.

鏡

The glass does not lie
Merely showing us ourselves
How we truly are

Reviews

[Kita Tataki (Emily Conn..]

I forgot how much I love your poems. Write more of them!! You have some really great stuff here. This is short and sweet but still enigmatic... it feels as though you could really flesh it out in some longer from rather than a haiku, but having it so direct also drives a certain impact with your words.

[KAREN]

I love it whem a person can write three lines and do it with meaning and feeling as you have. Well done!

[MiidniightSoul]

This is an amazing haiku. Powerful and beautiful. A truthful poem, and just those three lines make a big impact. Wonderful.

[Chelsea]

Loved this poem.----
One thing.... This poem is a bid redundant. In the second like your say us- ourselves. This kind of repeats itself. So maybe sneak a different word in there :) But I know with Haiku it can be tricky to find a good word.
As for the message.... Alot of people really don't realize their true colours.... But look in the mirror and you will. You may see a wonderful person in that mirror or a bad one. A personal choice i guess. Good insight on this one,
enjoyed reading :)
-PoetGirl