Deliver Me

Deliver Me

A Poem by Revolutionary
"

Lost love

"
Lately it feels
like I'm falling apart
and nobody else really cares

all I have loved
I have loved from the start
when nobody else really cared

All I have loved
I have loved all alone
somebody else loves you now

Sitting awake
feeling hard like a stone
I'm trying to shut you out

I got knots in my hair
a film on my teeth
and nobody else really cares

I smell like hell
I got filth on my feet
and nobody else really cares

I talk to myself
cause you don't talk to me
I try to imagine your there

Like god dropped a blessing
on the cold concrete
It rolled through the cracks in the stairs

CHORUS

I got this bottle of whiskey
that's slowly been killing me
still nobody else really cares

About a dozen hillbillies
would gladly buy it for me
As long as I pretend that I care

None of them are you
and it makes me feel a fool
I'll probably die here in this honkytonk town

But if the booze it treats me right
I'll sleep with one of you tonight
somebody please deliver me another round.

[Chorus] And try to remember me
when I was happy
and not just laughing
so I wouldn't cry
people out there on the street
used to say hello to me
now they all just turn away
as they pass me by


© 2012 Revolutionary


Author's Note

Revolutionary
You have to read this in the voice of a drunk southern woman

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Omg.....thats so sad! :( I love the repetition of the fact that she feels like nobody cares.....
Loved it! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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hale, MI



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